Wow! The story you have written is so good. The English is fluent, and the details of the story are quite connected. Except I do not like the tinge of sorrow in the story. hehe..
Not that I should criticise, since I havent written any story to contribute to this blog. hehe..
But I am worried. Worried that my story is not very interesting. I will try to write at least one story! I promise that before the end of 2006, I will! Yes, I will contribute one story. hehehe...

Wenya